AS Media coursework: audience feedback
Here's a presentation containing all my audience feedback. Generally, response was positive, which is always nice. Although, I was confronting them with my own film, so how many of them are really going to turn around and say "it's awful"?
In conclusion, the good points about the film were said to be:
- Variety of shots (specifically the cupboard shot and the hallway shot)
- Quality of acting
- Subtle use of mise-en-scene (especially the dining room set up)
- Build up of tension
The not so good points were said to be:
- Titles
- The tooth scene (it may not add anything / be necessary)
- Intrusive music. It has been suggested that the music is too much too soon, and tension would be better built if it began with no music, and built into music. However, not everyone agreed with this, as the suggestion was raised that it works better the original way.
- And of course, the fact that sometimes it's just not that easy to find a glass.
